Script redrafting

After receiving feedback from Mark on our voiceover script, Lewis had began to implement this feedback while I type up the plan for the radio trailer script.

UPDATE:

As the deadline is so soon I began to continue to work on the scripts so that I can show Lewis and Amy in lesson tomorrow and they can edit it if they wish to at the start of the lesson before we show them to Mark. I also have the sketch for our newspaper advert.